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Sorry Victor but I have to agree with jfm at al. The website is simply awful and amateurish. How many words will people read? Not as many as you would like, so you need to make every word count. I haven't time to do a thorough critique but take the first two pages I clicked on:
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"Home" page
Ask any experienced boat owner what he believes are the most important features of a Motor Boat.
The answer would include:
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Why is Motor Boat capitalised?
Number 1 feature - "safety"?
"Manoeuverability" mis-spelt (okay, it takes someone like me to spot that)
"Shallow draft"?
Email address appears blue/black on dark blue background so almost invisible, FFS!!
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"Economy" page
Fuel Consumption
See for yourself the incredible savings to be made on your annual running costs.
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See for myself? I wish I could There's not a mention of projected savings - just a boring table which includes irrelevant data on noise levels.
As far as the boat goes, I again agree with jfm. There is nothing about that boat that appeals to me. You have to decide what your target market is and then really work at what you need to do to appeal to them. I don't know if that product has a worthwhile market - if it has, it's not one I recognise.
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"Home" page
Ask any experienced boat owner what he believes are the most important features of a Motor Boat.
The answer would include:
[/ QUOTE ]
Why is Motor Boat capitalised?
Number 1 feature - "safety"?
"Manoeuverability" mis-spelt (okay, it takes someone like me to spot that)
"Shallow draft"?
Email address appears blue/black on dark blue background so almost invisible, FFS!!
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"Economy" page
Fuel Consumption
See for yourself the incredible savings to be made on your annual running costs.
[/ QUOTE ]
See for myself? I wish I could There's not a mention of projected savings - just a boring table which includes irrelevant data on noise levels.
As far as the boat goes, I again agree with jfm. There is nothing about that boat that appeals to me. You have to decide what your target market is and then really work at what you need to do to appeal to them. I don't know if that product has a worthwhile market - if it has, it's not one I recognise.