captainslarty
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Hi Nick, hope the sailing is going well and Cape Horn is not too windy like in the UK..
Have looked at your proposals, and offer the following 'constructive criticism'
Please dont think I am knocking your writing.. some is actually profitable, I mean good...
But....
Himalayas by Hyena has been done before...
Black sea by whiteman is controversial....
Cannibals on my Contessa could be seen as prejudice....
and Trekking Transylvania with Terrance was considered Gay..
WE DID LIKE ....
Mountaintop Madness with Maud...
Come on one Leg the Portugese way...
Mishap in Mongolia
and
The Horn in my Hourglass....
however.. some controvesy has arisen with 'Nun on the Bowsprit'.. I liked it, I really did, I thought the religeous overtones combined with the free spirit and the discovery of herself was masterful.. but the editor says it was 'before its time'.. whatever that means..
I enclose 100 euros for 'Single Handed sailing.. its the pits' .. I think thats a goer..
Sleep deprivation and the lonelyness of a drunk at sea... great catch phrase... but the photos were non existent...
100 miles out and how to make love to the avon... well, this has gone to our American branch,... could be movie rights.. need images..
All in all.. not bad, you are skint, but we are in slight profit.. please keep up the good work.
Please send the life insurance certificate you promised.
Yours sincerely..
Ocean promotion without comotion ltd
Have looked at your proposals, and offer the following 'constructive criticism'
Please dont think I am knocking your writing.. some is actually profitable, I mean good...
But....
Himalayas by Hyena has been done before...
Black sea by whiteman is controversial....
Cannibals on my Contessa could be seen as prejudice....
and Trekking Transylvania with Terrance was considered Gay..
WE DID LIKE ....
Mountaintop Madness with Maud...
Come on one Leg the Portugese way...
Mishap in Mongolia
and
The Horn in my Hourglass....
however.. some controvesy has arisen with 'Nun on the Bowsprit'.. I liked it, I really did, I thought the religeous overtones combined with the free spirit and the discovery of herself was masterful.. but the editor says it was 'before its time'.. whatever that means..
I enclose 100 euros for 'Single Handed sailing.. its the pits' .. I think thats a goer..
Sleep deprivation and the lonelyness of a drunk at sea... great catch phrase... but the photos were non existent...
100 miles out and how to make love to the avon... well, this has gone to our American branch,... could be movie rights.. need images..
All in all.. not bad, you are skint, but we are in slight profit.. please keep up the good work.
Please send the life insurance certificate you promised.
Yours sincerely..
Ocean promotion without comotion ltd
