A boaty grammar query.

NealB

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I think use of good English is important: nothing too interlekchewall, just basic stuff.

I'm currently helping a friend write an advert for a boat that he wants to sell.

Should she be described, as "a 27 foot bermudan cutter", or as a "27 feet, bermudan cutter"?

And is she bermuda, bermudan or bermudian rigged?
 

No mate (Moodsailor #8)! She's 27 feet on deck: then there's a wooden pole what sticks out over the pointed end, and a couple of wooden bits what stick out the back (they help to keep the mast up, I'm told).
 
If the measurement is used as an adjective use the singular. “I ran 100 meters” - meter as noun. “I ran a 100 meter race” - meter as adj.
But surely you have to define what kind of "meter" it is ...... or did you mean "metre"?

As for the OP, why not include pictures and an inventory - I'm sure the Mods won't mind!
 
27 foot.
we say '12 inch ruler' not 'a 12 inches ruler'.
A 3 storey house.
A ten man team.
I'd say Bermudan, but you can mostly assume that, anything else people will be very quick to say it's gaff rig or whatever?
 
‘27 feet’ only works with a full stop, so the first reads better.

’Bermudian’ is charmingly old-fashioned but would probably confuse today’s trendy sailors. Quite a few terms have changed over the years. I rather like the alternative spelling ‘spinaker’ which I occasionally use to annoy people.
 
But surely you have to define what kind of "meter" it is ...... or did you mean "metre"?

As for the OP, why not include pictures and an inventory - I'm sure the Mods won't mind!

I supect they (those groovy mods) might well object, so .......... no pics, no details, no inventory.
 
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